Meeting follow-up email
Before
I am writing this email to follow up regarding the meeting that we had previously discussed. I would like to kindly request that you please review the attached document at your earliest convenience, as it is important to note that the feedback deadline is Friday, June 12.
After
I'm following up about the meeting we discussed. Could you review the attached document? Feedback is due Friday, June 12.
Half the length, same request — and the June 12 deadline is preserved exactly.